Remi-le-Oduen's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Ink Krystal Chapter #2 - Boulevard of Broken Dreams]

It's okay. Can't say I'm really into it though. I feel like some actions and interactions feel forced and illogical. For example, why Imo doesn't tell Elliot about Eight? It could have been logical if her dad was not aware of her power, but since he knows and their relationship seems trusting, it is only natural for her to ask him what to do about this other person knowing about her quirk.
As for Eight's attempts to enroll Imo - he seems to not know whether he is trying to bribe her or to threaten her. And while she says she doesn't trust him, she then starts speaking with him of what she hoped to learn, which is strange. Shouldn't she be more scared of untrustworthy person who can imprison her in a closed subspace anytime he wants?
Anyway, the premise was good and I wonder what will happen next

[RFF Lure Lurkers]

Yep, I would have stopped asking questions many comic issues ago...

[Distance]

Oh my...

[The Ink Krystal Chapter #1 - Caught in a Dream]

Nice beginning with a bunch of hooks to grab reader's attention. A few things that I think were not necessary:
1.Giving a character's name in a separate cloud is not necessary if someone is calling him in the same page (or his name is given through the shop's banner)
2. Page 7 was totally redundant. A reader will understand everything simply from "a few years later" and Imogen calling Elliot "dad"
It's traditional "show, don't tell" approach.
I like the style and story so far anyway)

[Movie Sharing]

I get the feeling that Lynette actually wanted to watch it together but is too shy to ask directly

GraveGrime responds:

It could be that, or the fact she actually doesn't have a dvd player on the Necropolis, or the secret 3rd option... both.

[Hospital Things]

You should really reevaluate your quality management...

[antagonism]

For some reason I remembered Hellsing here, Alucard vs Anderson

[Amber's Webshow #4.5 - Advice for Coolness]

Love that "knocking" part, good one. Also great to see a new character in the series

[One hell of a fool for April Fools!🤡]

But how are his fingers nor burning?

Sphenodaile responds:

He's wearing gloves :D

[ABSOLUTE KILLER MOTH #1]

You almost got me here...