Erm... Cock joke?
Erm... Cock joke?
I like the premise, but the ending leaves me with some questions - why was not race stopped after the explosion? Was Gordolo training with his daughter on his back as an extra weight? Isn't this extra weight allowed on race? How did the girl made it there so fast? Are non-racers allowed on the track when the race is on? I mean, it's dangerous with such fast-moving people there. Overall, I think this ending kicked me out of immersion and spoiled the experience. Still love your style anyway
Sweets are much better than smoking!
It feels like some pages just jump out of nowhere or maybe I am just not familiar enough with the characters to understand what is going on. Nice style and overall story though
Someone is going to feel the punishment in the name of the Moon
I wonder if it's more terrible than a monster that tries to kill you
I have a suggestion - what if you make slight changes in the background from time to time? Like, a bee flying by the window on one of the frames? This could be like a small "find the secret" game.
Anyway, good work Amber!
Of course! I am fully aware I have been using the same background for each episode so far, I actually really like this idea! I have plans of doing more backgrounds depending on contexts but I do agree that the comic can feel extremely samey if the background isn't so dynamic! I'll put this suggestion to use for the future episodes! Appreciate the feedback! ^^
Hey that's a sweet plushie
Thank you!
Me needs some explanations, I am not that good with politics. Who is this guy in glasses and what he did?
Relatable
That guy that always asks for songs lyrics to be added in descriptions
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