Not bad, a bit short and low-pace, but not bad
Not bad, a bit short and low-pace, but not bad
Thanks!
Animation is not bad. The plot... could've been less obvious and somewhat more original/interesting. Also, the pause between his car stopped and collision is waaaayy too big.
okay, thank you for your critique. This will help me in te future.
Looks smooth and all. well done!
thank you
I actually like this. Nice idea
Thank you!
Pretty nice, made me wonder what they'll do with it
Nice to hear
Looks promising. I'd advise mixing speaking and action. For example, the characters can jump into fighting (like, the red one suspect that the other guy caused the destruction and attack him). And yeah, you'd better find someone to correct language mistakes.
Hello Bro thanks for your comment. Examples of mistakes. English is not my native language. Have a nice day :)
That guy that always asks for songs lyrics to be added in descriptions
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