God, that's so true. We really should've done that long ago...
God, that's so true. We really should've done that long ago...
In all honesty, I like overall melody, but those "ooh"s at the beginning just made my ears bleed...
Amazing piece, but I feel like ending at 2:11 is a bit anticlimatic, I expected something really peak and extatic... Still loved it though, gave me some nostalgic dreamy vibes
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Hell yeah, that's powerful.
The only thing that I felt a bit out of place is that transition to more modern-sounding part at 1:20 was a bit too sudden to me. Maybe some more pure and hollow-sounding drums as an intermediate part could've made that transition more smooth, but idk, I know nothing about music production so you might as well ignore this rambling
Thank you very much for your feedback. I understand what you mean. Creating such transitions can sometimes be very tricky. I'll continue to try and improve in the future.
Nice, loved this, would be cool to hear more.
Mmm, what a delicious piece
Thanks for your tasty listen.
Damn this one is really amazing
Nice EP. looping the plot is cool
Glad you enjoyed it!
The beginning of the lyrics really kicked me out of immersion, all the screaming right away don't resonate with the melody. At least for me
I get that. In fairness, I mixed the vocals a touch too loud, and needed to make it less abrasive. It actually drowns out the rhythm section, aside from the snare. Plus, my main inspiration for the track was far less melodic leading into the first vocal part than how I did it. It is what it is; I think it's fine, it just needs some adjustments, mixing wise
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