Remi-le-Oduen's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Spring break ‘24]

Yummy food places are important

Yonsoncb responds:

Indeed!

[Noir in a dress]

I actually don't understand this strange cuts on hips or sides of the belly. They look weird to me and totally not appealing. Also, if I remember correctly, there's a general rule or good practice that there's better be one revealing accent, like if it's open back, then no cleavage and vice versa.

Unlikelyturtle responds:

Not gonna lie when I first saw this dress, was confused if it was even possible to wear

[Trooper Model 1]

Reminded me of old fighting game "Oni" There were red training robots looking somewhat similar

ThatWormStudios responds:

Huh, that does look kind of similar ig

[Queens of Harem 0.12 - Pilot]

So... He is like muscle of the team and brain of the team, but only one of those at a time... Cool idea actually, I don't think I saw this anywhere else. A great character feature.

HenLP responds:

That's very high praise for an incidental characterization choice. As long as there's no breaks in the story, I'm glad.

[Sho, Blade for Hire, Wanted Dead o̶r̶ ̶a̶l̶i̶v̶e̶]

Pretty nice)
Page 3,frame 2, the right hand position looks weird to me. Also, probably would be better if she stabbed him with left hand, the one she had on her waist, near the weapon, on the previous frame

PerKGrok responds:

She IS stabbing him with the left hand and the knife is in a sheath at her left side at the start in the first panel. The hand at her hip is at her right side. There she only have arrows.

The move is that she pivot around her right foot, getting out of the direct line of attack. Right arm goes up empty handed to meet the attack and protect the head. Arms meet wrist to wrist . She guides the attacking arm away and down from her and her right hand ends up in the crock of his arm.

Meanwhile her left hand draws the knife and preforms an ice-pick stab.

I could have spent a couple of frames to explain the move, but that is not important for the story. Here I was more interested in showing her speed and how she ends the fight with one ruthless move.

I hope the panel makes more sense to you now. 🙂

[Spoiled Sanctum]

The scroll he is showing them is probably a due rent warning.

HappytoDraw responds:

Yes eviction notice 😁

[Queens of Harem 0.09 - Pilot]

You rely on tools and not on your own abilities...

HenLP responds:

Unlike me! A loser god, through and through!

[SATA MURDER]

Oh my this is really crazy. This is like... Escalator... No, elevator... No, eviscerator!

Daunder responds:

Osaka would totally quote the Perpetual motion machine speech
thx btw ^^

[A Girl and Her Droid: Book2, Part 4]

I hope this big robot will kick him in the guts the same way

Artist-Lost responds:

I love the idea, but I did something different due to this robot not being sentient like BOB. That said if it was like BOB that would have been hilarious to have him get kneed like 50 times.

[Elf girl]

Yeah, that's how female characters dress in this world. Sorry, not my rules. Blame the creators. Now let's go fight goblins or whatever. Oh yeah, there's winter outside too.

MichLouBertsky responds:

Who needs armour when you can poke your opponent's eye out with a stiff nipple. Those are the advantages of the winter season