Remi-le-Oduen's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[BIRD DAY]

Happy birthday!

[The Black Shuck]

This line on his side makes me instantly think of cardiogram. It's like a cardiologist nightmare dog.

[Psychic-Bullet Angels Pilot]

Okay, I like this. It's pretty simple and straightforward, but I guess that's intentional and sort of what makes it appealing. My bit of complaint is that I feel that character introduction is too fast, especially with the sins/virtues thing, I'd rather this was shown to us gradually instead of being told by the psychic in the first chapter.

[Sol]

Awesome details here, total blast

[Sho, Blade for Hire, Wanted Dead o̶r̶ ̶a̶l̶i̶v̶e̶]

Pretty nice)
Page 3,frame 2, the right hand position looks weird to me. Also, probably would be better if she stabbed him with left hand, the one she had on her waist, near the weapon, on the previous frame

PerKGrok responds:

She IS stabbing him with the left hand and the knife is in a sheath at her left side at the start in the first panel. The hand at her hip is at her right side. There she only have arrows.

The move is that she pivot around her right foot, getting out of the direct line of attack. Right arm goes up empty handed to meet the attack and protect the head. Arms meet wrist to wrist . She guides the attacking arm away and down from her and her right hand ends up in the crock of his arm.

Meanwhile her left hand draws the knife and preforms an ice-pick stab.

I could have spent a couple of frames to explain the move, but that is not important for the story. Here I was more interested in showing her speed and how she ends the fight with one ruthless move.

I hope the panel makes more sense to you now. 🙂

[Spoiled Sanctum]

The scroll he is showing them is probably a due rent warning.

HappytoDraw responds:

Yes eviction notice 😁

[Don't Peek Under There!]

Brilliant

[Get out there, Ned the Knight (+ lore)]

He might need a ranged weapon out there. A crossbow will be nice

[Neptune's New Moons!]

Wow, that's news to me. Thanks once again!

[Queen of the Portal moment]

Nice art, congratulations once again, your majesty