I'd say it's ok, but shooting laser or whatever it was was not necessary
I'd say it's ok, but shooting laser or whatever it was was not necessary
It wasn't exactly a fight with only punches, i had to add something to make It interesting!
Thise old men are so easily offended...
So, is he possessed by a shroom thing now?
Nice, love how the atmosphere and non-serious vibe is set right fron the start, the potion was cool too
Cool stuff. Love them music as a weapon thing
Sometimes simple measures are the best choice
What a cool name. Probably
i think its a cool name XD but its good to have a nick just in case
I love to air out often too. My colleagues don't understand me though...
Not bad, I see efforts put in here and I like the premise. To me this seemed too long for a pilot and inconsistent plotwise. The starting point is they need a drummer, but in the end they don't find one, instead we have the introduction block that was not really necessary because we have them introduced via their dialogues. I'd suggest having only the introduction part and some more music for the pilot and looking for a drummer as a complete first episode with actually finding one maybe.
Thank you! I agree with this, there's a couple things that you mentioned that I'd have done diiferently if I thought more about it. The pilot was mostly to develop the characters and the setting rather than the overarching plot, and I think that I should have focused more on the plot now that you mention it xD, I really appreciate the criticism, I'll take some of what you said into consideration.
That was pretty cool, your art style really fits the folk tales
Thanks 🙂
That guy that always asks for songs lyrics to be added in descriptions
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