I feel like higher tones should be faster, and there should be more of them otherwise the main low-tone rythm breaks the track into weakly connected parts.
I feel like higher tones should be faster, and there should be more of them otherwise the main low-tone rythm breaks the track into weakly connected parts.
Me day just got a lot better! Thanks for this great piece!
I'm not really sure about this. I guess the main tones that were almost constant throughout the track make it boring. Changing them from time to time can be a good idea. But it's just an opinion of someone totally lacking of any music-making knowledge, so whatever.
Thanks for the feedback. Don't be afraid to offer critiques just because you lack music making knowledge, it's not like only the only people who can listen to music are the ones who make it :P
I know a lot of my tracks need improvement, so it's good to hear in what ways people like or dislike my music. That way, when I come back to these older tracks in the future, I will know what areas to focus on
Straightforwardness is good sometimes. In this case, it's very good.
Thank you! Enjoyed keeping it simple with this revisit, glad you liked it :)
You've done some awesome work with this piece! The only part that seems like not polished enough is between 2:00-2:30, it's repetitive without altering intencity or rythm thus stalling the whole track instead of preparing for the final accords.
Greetings!
Thank you so much for the feedback! I see what you mean, it certainly needs more build or a sooner finish maybe. Will certainly work on this in future! Cheers again!
I like this. But can't say I love this. It's a bit... well, I don't know. Maybe some of the instruments were too monotonous.
Hey that's cool! Nice start for my today checking of music with 5 stars!
Nice, good atmosphere
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Can't say I have the same image from the track, but it's good, I like it a lot
Very good atmospheric track, 5 stars and no less!
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