Remi-le-Oduen's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Battle In The Clouds]

Yep, sound similar to "Sky Siege" but there is a difference too. Sky Siege sounded like an actual engament track, this one for me sounds like having more parts, like, you know, "reading for the battle"-"takeoff"-"fight". And if this impression of mine is what you intended, then maybe last part should be more emphasized. You may even think of merging this track and Sky Siege in one 4 or 5 min. cinematic piece.

JohnM93 responds:

Hello again! Thanks for checking out more of my stuff!

Aye I was thinking of combining them, potentially through chopping up and completely rearranging the order of the sections. Certainly something to experiment with! Thanks again!!

[Before the fall]

I feel like higher tones should be faster, and there should be more of them otherwise the main low-tone rythm breaks the track into weakly connected parts.

[We march with pride]

Me day just got a lot better! Thanks for this great piece!

[Painted smile]

I'm not really sure about this. I guess the main tones that were almost constant throughout the track make it boring. Changing them from time to time can be a good idea. But it's just an opinion of someone totally lacking of any music-making knowledge, so whatever.

GreyHooves responds:

Thanks for the feedback. Don't be afraid to offer critiques just because you lack music making knowledge, it's not like only the only people who can listen to music are the ones who make it :P
I know a lot of my tracks need improvement, so it's good to hear in what ways people like or dislike my music. That way, when I come back to these older tracks in the future, I will know what areas to focus on

[Gunpowder [2017 Reload]]

Straightforwardness is good sometimes. In this case, it's very good.

TSRBand responds:

Thank you! Enjoyed keeping it simple with this revisit, glad you liked it :)

[Sky Siege]

You've done some awesome work with this piece! The only part that seems like not polished enough is between 2:00-2:30, it's repetitive without altering intencity or rythm thus stalling the whole track instead of preparing for the final accords.

JohnM93 responds:

Greetings!

Thank you so much for the feedback! I see what you mean, it certainly needs more build or a sooner finish maybe. Will certainly work on this in future! Cheers again!

[His Last Departure]

I like this. But can't say I love this. It's a bit... well, I don't know. Maybe some of the instruments were too monotonous.

[MegaDoom]

Hey that's cool! Nice start for my today checking of music with 5 stars!